waits for the day she smells fresh rain again. Gets energised by nature. These days she just wants to get enough rest and is busy setting up a place which she can call home for the next 2 years.
did you write that yourself? I liked the way the verse (is that what it is?) rhymes at the beginning. That is a common indian language verbal gesture too - to have the same common word or words at the beginning of consecutive sentences. American politicians also use these rhetorical flourishes - Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country. stuff like that. of course if your verse has to be read right to left, then never mind lor! Guess who left this "dump" as a comment? :) the indian reference above might be a red herring.
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did you write that yourself? I liked the way the verse (is that what it is?) rhymes at the beginning. That is a common indian language verbal gesture too - to have the same common word or words at the beginning of consecutive sentences. American politicians also use these rhetorical flourishes - Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country. stuff like that. of course if your verse has to be read right to left, then never mind lor! Guess who left this "dump" as a comment? :) the indian reference above might be a red herring.
Yao likes it, loves it and will treasure it. Always.
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